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The guests arrived early

Wed Sep 16, 2009, 9:36 PM
So, massive continuity error in the first chapter of the book due to careless use of copy and paste - in the opening they referenced the tanakans twice. Not a problem, except for the fact they hadn't shown up yet.

I did some other minor tweeks to the writing. If you've read the first chapter of Chrome Warriors previously, you can just concern yourself with re-reading section 1 to see how things should have gone.

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