I did some other minor tweeks to the writing. If you've read the first chapter of Chrome Warriors previously, you can just concern yourself with re-reading section 1 to see how things should have gone.


Where does it go?The claw thumps the wall An avalanche of brick A rain of cinder block The claw grabs a support beam It wrenches free What was above is now below The claw clears debris Urinals, phone hubs and wiring pour from the hole The buildings entrails spilling outWhere does it go?
The earth mover sets to work Moving what once was building (is it a building mover now?) Jaws closing Arm lifting and swinging Maw opening up and vomitting into a dump truck Jaws close again The machine has an insatiable hunger Its mouth never swallows
Full of a place that once w


Hated VeinsHATED VEINSHated Veins
I don\'t ever want to see your
face see your face disgrace my heart tearing it shredding it all apart seeing me whither and shrivel in to a heep leavng the flock like a forsaken sheep still hurting and writhing within please make it stop (i can\'t go through this again) it hurts so much this second time around it marks its territory leaving a permantent frown seering is the pain leaving hate to reign


your love smellOUR LOVEyour love smell
The smell of your love is upon me your love awaits my love together we'll make new love sweet love hard love your love my love bring me to ecstacy love the love of your nation your land, your soul The smell of your love is upon me waking me up in a glow


In timeIN TIME (song/poem)In time
I feel so alone and unwakened I want someone to be by my side I hurt theres a whole that needs to be taken.
oh how it hurts inside
Theres a peirce in the sky i want to crawl in and watch all
my dreams unfold
but how do i do this down here when I\'m stuck in this horrible world
(chorus) I want to fly away
never to come back again keep away and cleanse all of my sins runaway and never to rewind i\'ll find my soul in time
hello who are you dear girl that i s
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Instead of counting candles,
Or tallying the years,
Contemplate your blessings,
As your birthday nears.
Consider special people
Who love you, and who care,
And others whove enriched your life
Just by being there.
Think about the memories
Passing years can never mar,
Experiences great and small
That have made you who you are.
Another year is a happy gift,
So cut your cake, and say,
"Instead of counting birthdays,
I count blessings every day!"
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Love that lives in the heart cannot be so easily terminated by time. Even though the encounter is brief its impression shall last a lifetime. No one can change the direction of love that lives in the heart. If you have loved that in itself is the answer.
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